In case you saw the earlier post...

[oloriel]

... and wonder where it has disappeared: The author suddenly got cold feet and wanted me to delete the entry. So I turned it invisible. Maybe he'll change his mind. Or it'll stay invisible. At any rate, that's what happened!

Comments

[ysilme]

Oh, I'm sorry to hear this! I read it but got side-tracked before commenting, and then the entry was gone. I really enjoyed the story, it was a lovely read with great ideas, and well told. I particularly liked the rat village (or town?) and the underground idea.

[oloriel]

I'll tell him if he changes his mind about wanting other people to read his story! Right now, he doesn't even want his grandmother to look at it. Poor fellow! The self-doubts of an aspiring writer!